ESSAY 14

SORU:

Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.

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Parents always want best for their children. However when people are teenager they don’t want their parent’s advises or opinions .In this period the most important thing in young adults life is being popular, having more friend, more parties or more fun. For them parents are only bar to achieve that. Parents don’t influence their children and they don’t understand each other. Therefore I think teenagers are influenced by their friends more than their parents.

Teenagers can get along well with their peers easily because they have same expectations about life. In school, in their social life they always with their friends. They can understand each other because they have same viewpoınt and same experiences. For example, when you have a boyfriend you can’t share it with your father easily because he tries to protect you. Probably he said that you are too young or you should be careful. Teenagers don’t want these advises they only want to share their happiness and their parents don’t do that. Because of that they are closer with their friends. They don’t listen their parents and don’t want to be like them.

Moreover teenagers always spend their time with their friends. They are together in school almost every day and after a while they start to act like them. Currently a lot of teenagers start smoking because they try to be like their friends. They don’t care what their parents think. They have different expectations about life. They want to be popular, they want to have a lot of friends and they believe that they should be like their friends to achieve that. On the other hand maybe when they grow up and have a baby they understand their parents and they want to be a parent like them. But in these ages parents are not their role models.

In conclusıon, because of these reasons I think friends are influence teenagers more than parents. Although parents have more experiences and they try to make best for their children, good or bad way teenagers are influenced by their friends.

DEĞERLENDİRME:

Parents always want best (the best/what is best) for their children. However, when people are teenagers they don’t (when people are young, they do not / teenagers do not ) want their parent’s (parents’) advises (advice) or opinions. In (During/Throughout) this period, the most important thing in a young adults life is being popular, having more friends, more parties or more fun. For them, parents are the only bar (obstacle) to achieve that (yada To them, the only obstacle to achieve that is their parents). Parents don’t (do not) influence their children and they don’t understand each other (yada , nor do they understand each other). Therefore, I think teenagers are influenced by their friends more than their parents.

Teenagers can get along well with their peers easily because they have the same expectations about life. In school and in their social life they always with their friends. They can understand each other because they have the same viewpoint and the same experiences (yada they share similar views and experiences). For example, when you have a boyfriend you can’t (cannot) share it with your father easily because he tries to protect you. Probably he said that (he will probably say that) you are too young or you should be careful. Teenagers don’t (do not) want these advises (want to hear an advice) . They only want to share their happiness,and (but) their parents don’t (do not) do (do fiili olmamış ya fiili değiştir ya da cümleyi) that. Because of that, they are closer with their friends. They don’t (do not) listen their parents and don’t (do not) want to be like them.

Moreover, teenagers always spend their time (yada: spend time) with their friends. They are together in school almost every day, and after a while they start to act like them (yada:alike). Currently, a lot of teenagers start smoking because they try to be like their friends. They don’t (do not) care what their parents think. They have different expectations about life. They want to be popular, they want to have a lot of friends, and they believe that they should be like their friends to achieve that. On the other hand, maybe when they grow up and have a baby they will understand their parents and they want (and want) to be a parent (just) like them. But in these ages (In this day and age, however, ) parents are not their role models.

In conclusion, because of these reasons I think friends are influence (influence) teenagers more than parents. Although parents have more experiences and they try to make best for their children, in a good or bad way, teenagers are influenced by their friends.

 

KELİME SAYISI: 344

 

PUAN: FAIR

 

TOEFL DERS NOTLARI DEĞERLENDİRME TABLOSU

 

Level

Test Rating

Scaled Score Range

GOOD

GOOD +

GOOD -

4.0-5.0

24-30

28-30

24-27

FAIR

FAIR +

FAIR -

2.5-3.5

17-23

20-23

17-19

LIMITED

LIMITED +

LIMITED -

1.0-2.0

1-16

13-16

1-12

 

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